feedback on wording, Turning Fear Into Excitement quest text
Hi. :)
Noticed an odd bit of copy. On https://www.superbetter.com/heroes/350834/power_ups/2924815
It says "Any time you (even slightly) enjoy being afraid or anxious by adding breath or imagining a positive outcome"
I think it's missing a few words. I can't even quite piece together what it was meant to say, although I can grok the meaning.
Maybe, "Any time =fear affects something= you (even slightly) enjoy, =reduce your level of= being afraid or anxious by adding =an extra= breath or imagining a positive outcome."
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